Firefly Eyes

June 30, 2006, 4:59 pm

Flames burn, in these sunken skull eyes,and fireflies dance in their hollowed caves,flickering shadows rise and fade on the ground,a shadow ball, the bugs attend,death casting it's spell, over a weak...

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Re: Firefly Eyes

June 30, 2006, 7:08 pm

Wonderful Images Macabre!!"and on these flames burn, these firefly eyes,entertaining the feast of the wild,these firefly eyes,dancing,in the night."This is Chilling...Yet Beautiful...Deeply Felt Verse...

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Re: Firefly Eyes

July 1, 2006, 1:35 am

for some the isnanely twisted is the most beautifull, and we all have our own tastes. I meant this one to be more gothic and terrible sounding, but I'm glad you enjoyed it the way you did. Thank you...

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Re: Firefly Eyes

July 1, 2006, 3:24 pm

youve been writing lately with a bit more maturity than when we first met.. its impressive... your branching out more with types of situations.. i like it !Visit me at To the end of the earth I search...

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Re: Firefly Eyes

July 1, 2006, 5:35 pm

Impressive, there is indeed a haunting beauty to this Stay the night dont think it over/I could die if you dont stay over/Hold me tight/Save all the long goodbyes/And stay the night/Tonight.

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Re: Firefly Eyes

July 2, 2006, 6:04 am

What was interesting to me is the way you juxtaposed the imagery of the living nature of the fireflies and their motion with the stillness of death. Very nive piece that speaks its words softly but...

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Re: Firefly Eyes

July 2, 2006, 3:42 pm

Thank you all, for the beautifull comments. =) Tlainya- a special thanks to you for the award. I am truly touched, as i believe this is the first i've recieved from you, and seeing as how little you...

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